That was nice, though I agree with MJJ. Maybe you can get your start as one of those guys who write those high fantasy novellas you always see at dollar general hidden amidst the generic romance paperbacks that all named things like "His Was Her's" and "Nocturne Paprika" that your aunt reads as a supplement to masturbation cause her vajay is dead and falling out and you go to check them out for a laugh with your buds to read the backs but find the fantasy one and it has some cool prog rock-ass cover on it.
